Essay And Research Paper

My name is Olga. I am a teacher of English from Ukraine. At present I am preparing for CAE test. Would you, please, kindly look through my essay? The topic is "Which facilities should receive money from local authorities?" In the essay I should choose 2 facilities (from museums, sports centres and public gardens) and explain which facility it is more important to give money to, giving reasons in support of my answer. CAE  Essay Correction and Feedback The prosperity of the city, as well as allocation of funds for its development, has always been an important issue for local authorities. This essay considers two facilities which deserve to  receive investment from the city budget on a first-priority-basis and discusses which of the two should be granted the money for improvement. On the one hand, museums play a significant role in the cultural life of every citizen, as they preserve the objects of ancient history. Moreover, a great number of books, rare manuscripts and other