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CPE Writing correction and Feedback

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Buenos dias Gustavo, Te mando un ejercicio que he realizado del WRITING PART 1 para ver si me lo podriais corregir, como he visto que pone en vuestra web. Me lo estoy preparando por mi cuenta y la verdad es que no tengo manera de saber como ando en la competencia de WRITING, por lo tanto estoy muy agradecido por tu iniciativa. Muy buena web por cierto, me esta siendo de gran utilidad. Muchas gracias Un saludo Amit Wealth, the final frontier Does Economic wellbeing bring happiness? (Feedback- Students usually start with an introductory paragraph. It should be 3-4 lines long and it states the topic that both texts have in common. You can see some examples in the blog) Some people feel strongly against this way of thinking. Wealth is measured in relation to the wealth of others, so effectively; our happiness would be dependent on those around us, when ideally it should be under our control. Additionally, the elation and feeling of happiness we receive from consuming products (be it a hou

C1 en CUID (centro de idiomas a distancia) de UNED

Hola Gustavo, he descubierto tu blog sobre el C1 y me sirve de gran ayuda. Adjunto te envío un writing para que me des tu opinión y corrijas lo que sea necesario. Gracias de antemano y un saludo, Elena Ramos Task Write a review on a film or TV series that you like. Please try to stick to the word limit (200 words) A review.  (Give us a better title...A review on...) T he bridge is a police drama TV series set in Scandinavia and the third season was released last year. It was broadcasted on BBC4 channel and on AXN in Spain. The first episode begins when a woman´s dead body is found in the middle of the bridge marking the border between Sweden and Denmark. Not only was she killed, but also her body was cut in half. After some inquiries are carried out, it is discovered that each half belongs to a different body. A Danish inspector and a Swedish police woman work together to find out who the killer is. The main characters are Saga who suffers from Asperger syndrome, a disorder characteriz

CPE Letter to the Editor Correction

Hola, he leído en vuestra web que ayudáis a corregir writings, lo cual me alegra, porque quiero sacarme el c2 y al trabajar no tengo tiempo de ir a una academia, y claro necesito una ayuda con la parte del writings para saber cómo lo estoy haciendo. Espero q me podáis ayudar. saludos!!! Raquel Vilaplana Task : you have recently become aware of a situation which you believe to be wrong or unjust and which you think should be dealt with by the authorities.Write a letter to a newspaper clearly describing  that situation ,explaining the problems it causes and saying what you believe should be done about it: Dear Sir or Madam, Unfortunatelly bullying is increasingly affecting more and more schools . I currently work as a teacher at St Patirck’s school , and sadly I have to witness situations of bullying almost every day. This unfair and dramatic situation urge to be sttoped,  otherwise it will get more and more complicated. (Feedback: avoid repeating words) Me, along my workmates  My co

FCE Writing Correction and Feedback

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Hola! he visto en tu página que se te pueden mandar writings para corregirlos. Te mando un essay para el first y si puedes ayudarme, lo agradezco! Saludos! Karin FCE ESSAY Is it better to have older or younger parents? Due to factors like the economic crisis and the need to find good jobs, many people delay having children and become parents at a rather old age. But is it good for children? I believe there are actually many advantages in having young parents.  First of all parents and sons have more things in common because the generation al gap between them is thin. They are likely to share hobbies, music and taste for trips, which contributes to a good relationship. Secondly, they have a similar way of doing things and understanding the world. It is possible for them to talk about everything, put in each other´s shoes and find solutions to problems  Thirdly, they share more or less the same level of energy. An old parent will have more difficulty in teaching their children how to rid