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CPE Essay Sample and Correction

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Dear Gustavo kindly read my essay for CPE .Thanks. Eliza Fernandez Genetic engineering Over the past few decades science and technology have changed every aspect of life . However in medical science it’s  its evidence is even more transparent for the recent research innovated a process called genetic engineering that eventually makes way for unnatural birth for the first time on earth . (Feedback: Is the introduction clear? By reading the introduction, does the reader have a clear idea of what your are goint to write about?)   As scientists claim genetic engineering is an evolutionary process itself . The process is capable of editing faulty genes from animals while the embryo is under gastronomical development. This replacement of faulty genes will ensure healthy cubs free from genetic mutation and diseases that originate from parental genes will also be edited which indicate birth of more healthy animal cubs and crop. Reasonably, there will be more new varieties of plants as well
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Letter to the Editor Sample CPE exam 2017

Good morning Gustavo, I have read in your blog that you offer yourself to correct CPE writings I have decided to send you one so you could give me some comments and feedback in respect. Thank you, Clara Grau You read this comment recently in a literary magazine about a book you enjoyed reading. “The author’s use of language to build up atmosphere and to give insights into the characters’ thoughts and emotions is not as effective as it could be. This was a disappointing aspect of the book”. You disagree and decide to write a letter to the magazine, expressing your opinion. Write between 280 and 320 words. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you because I disagree with a comment posted in your last week’s magazine  issue about the last novel of Sarah Nuttall, and I would like to give my opinion in respect to it. For the past two months, I have been experiencing a tough time due to family problems and it has been very difficult to me to find something to entertain myself with and give me the
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Good morning Gustavo I would like to have my writing corrected. I attatch you the file Regards, Sara Muñoz Enviado desde Correo de Windows INSTRUCTIONS Write an essay discussing two of the methods in your notes. You should explain which method you think is more important for governments to consider, and provide reasons to support your opinion. Methods of minimising the use of fossil fuels Recycling Increasing taxes of petrol Increasing the number of nuclear energy Some opinions expressed in the discussion ‘Is the technology for recycling adequatedly developed?’ ‘Increased taxation will not be a sufficient deterrent’ ‘Nuclear energy is too risky’ How fossil fuels should be limited? The impact of fossil fuels in our society has rencently been discussed the question of the impact that fossil fuels have had in our society.   ( Feedback: where? by who? why? ) In this essay I will put forward some ideas to cut down the use of these nonrenewable energies. (Why should we cut them down?) The
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CPE Essay Sample 2017

Hello! I'm not sure that you still do the free writings corrections but in case you do, I would like to send one of my practice essays for CPE (Writing Task 1). Thank you in advance! Regards, Olga Task? 1. Even in our information-rich digital age, when there are diverse ways of occupying our leisure time, museums continue to play a fundamental role in society. Over the last decade in particular, museums have become more community-orientated, and the majority seek to be inclusive rather than elitist, reaching out to everyone. This change of heart has necessitated a degree of creativity in the presentation of information. Objects rarely ‘speak for themselves’ and, where a low reading age must often be assumed, museum curators have looked to modern technology to breathe more life into exhibits, whether through interactive techniques, or accompanying audio-visual effects. 2. The purpose of museum is to stimulate learning and broaden the horizons of its visitors
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CPE Writing practice. Restaurant Review

Dear Gustavo My name is Kate. I'm on the way to my CPE exam in June and saw your ad about sample writing corrected for free. I'd like to send you my review of a restaurant. I might as well send you more because I know from my own experience how badly you need to read some samples sometimes when you prepare for your exam. Hope you like it! Regards, Katerina Katabi Restaurant review Chester There are a number of restaurants, bars and cafes in our city which cater for different tastes of their guests. But there is one that stands out for its unique atmosphere and an excellent service. (Which one??? )  Even though it has recently opened, it became an immediate success, so to avoid any disappointment the reservation has to be made well in advance. (Recommendations maybe at the end, not in the intro) The first thing that strikes you as you enter the place is the interior created by a famous and trendy designer. A former industrial loft converted into a restaurant may appear inappropr
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CPE Essay sample 2017 free feedback and writing correction

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Dear Gustavo Please correct my writing for CPE. Eliza Fernandez MEDIA AND INTRUSION Everybody will agree to the point that over the past few years the extent of intrusion of the media has made into the private lives of individuals is unblustering for they are subsequently facing denigration to their right of privacy increased. The media has deviated from the informative role it once played in finding people important news on papers or containing useful information one sought all these have been mitigated since medi a and has engaged itself more into publishing facts and information related to private lives of famous individuals . How come the issue does not concern us ? (Feedback: Introduction hast to be short and to the point). I n most part the media is constantly tying up with the sort of news demanded from public part in that falls a section of people interested to stay tuned up with daily updates coming from glamour world which at large focus on the life of celebrities,
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CPE June 2017 Writing and feedback

Hello Gustavo, My name is Maria M. and I am taking the CPE  exam this June. I am having some problems with my writings and I spend a lot of time trying to find the correct ideas,  so I hope you can help me improve my skills. I suppose it is a matter of practice. Thank you so much in advance. I send you attached the task and my writing. This is the task: An English language magazine is running a series on the topic of happiness. You decide to send in an article. You should briefly describe one or two situations in which you have experienced a sense of happiness. You should also analyse what contributes to feelings of happiness for many people and suggest whether the pursuit is a worthwhile aim. Writings + Feedback Happiness: The eternal search.  ( Feedback:Why did you choose this title? Why is it an eternal search? Do you mean it is impossible to find happiness? ) Why is happiness so vital for the humankind?. What makes people feel happy?.  The answers to these questions can be so dive
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