The task comes from a book called "Succeed in Cambridge English: Proficiency" by Andrew Betsis, Sean Haughton and Lawrence Mamas published by GLOBAL ELT.


Essay on technology, young prople and communication nowadays.


Technology is the fastest-growing field of our time. Nevertheless, there does not seem to be much middle ground when discussing its advantages and disadvantages for young people. The first passage critiques the high dependency of youngsters on technology and expounds ways in which it harms them. The second one praises it, showing us the other side of the coin, high level of interaction among people, awareness of worl-wide events and 24-hour availability of information.


Three main ideas are explored throughout the first text: first of all, juveniles being so addicted to computer-type technology which allegedly prevents them from expressing themselves properly. Secondly, the immense amount of time they weekly spend online (playing games or writing posts on social networks) directly ensues in “social incompetence”, as defined by the author. Thirdly and in relation to the latter scenario, it is suggested that young users of these platforms are far from serving its original purpose: social interaction.

On the other hand, the second text weighs in positively on the myriad ways in which this so-called communication revolution unites and keeps people informed. Firstly, it is stated place and time-wise limits are no longer an issue when interacting. Moreover, not only do Skype, messaging and other applications make possible instant communication, but they also make people more aware of what happens in the world. Finally, the endless information available thanks to this revolution is certainly thought commendable on the grounds of a more informed and discerning juvenile.

In conclusion, technology can be perilous or useful depending on how it is used. As a young student, I strongly believe it to be extremely useful, as a source of information, as a way to quick-share knowledge, and as a way to make inexpensive interaction possible.

Sent by Patricia de Pastors
Number of words: 280


Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Cambridge CPE Essay model

Image
  To be or not to be home? (Tip for the CPE takers: Write always a title, try to be original and choose an eye-catching one !)   Nowadays people live a life in the fast lane, which is not only detrimental to their well-being but can also distort their personalities. Therefore it is of vital importance to e ntertaining ourselves and find good ways to relax. But what is the best way and the best place to do that?  There is a group of people who yearn for quietness and simply enjoy being home. For them there is nothing better than just escaping the backbreaking day of work by watching tv in the sofa or reading a riveting book. And not only that, researchers suggest that being in a familiar environment can be the ideal place for  problem-solving and finding peace of mind.  Having a hobby that  you can do in the safety of your own house can truly allow people to reconnect with themselves, it is scientific fact. Nevertheless there are some people who are more reluctant to stay home and would
Read more

CAE June 2016 Essay Sample

Image
Your class has watched a studio discussion about factors which have contributed to the recent increase in international travel. You have made the notes below: Factors contributing to the increase in international travel: methods of transport global business media Some opinions expressed in the discussion: “ It’s quicker to fly abroad than to take a train to the north of my country!” “ My company has offices in 12 different countries.” “ People have developed a love of other cultures through TV and film.” Write an essay for your tutor discussing two of the factors in your notes. You should explain which factor has contributed more to the increase in international travel, providing reasons to support your opinion. You may, if you wish, use the opinions expressed in the discussion, but you should use your own words as far as possible. Essay on International Travel It goes without saying that there has been a recent increase in international travel. More and more people are now grabbi
Read more

Letter to the Editor Sample CPE exam 2017

Good morning Gustavo, I have read in your blog that you offer yourself to correct CPE writings I have decided to send you one so you could give me some comments and feedback in respect. Thank you, Clara Grau You read this comment recently in a literary magazine about a book you enjoyed reading. “The author’s use of language to build up atmosphere and to give insights into the characters’ thoughts and emotions is not as effective as it could be. This was a disappointing aspect of the book”. You disagree and decide to write a letter to the magazine, expressing your opinion. Write between 280 and 320 words. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you because I disagree with a comment posted in your last week’s magazine  issue about the last novel of Sarah Nuttall, and I would like to give my opinion in respect to it. For the past two months, I have been experiencing a tough time due to family problems and it has been very difficult to me to find something to entertain myself with and give me the
Read more