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CPE 2017 Have your writing corrected

Submitted by  Zlatka Plavec Write an Essay summarising and commenting on the two texts. 240-280 Words  Tackling Traffic Congestion Policy-makers employ a wide range of measures to tackle the problem of traffic congestion. Enforcement schemes such as setting strict speed limits on major roads and the use of congestion charges in city centres are two such examples as are vehicle exclusion zones or parking restrictions in busy pedestrian areas. However, it also makes sense to encourage motorists to become less reliant on their car. This can be achieved by making public transport more efficient and promoting the benefits of car-sharing with work colleagues, thus reducing weekly fuel bills. And the increasing number of cycle lanes on many roads is further evidence of how to win the hearts and minds of motorists in the fight against congestion .The Joy of Motoring Recent research into the attitudes of motorists shows we are still more than happy to get behind the wheel. Despite rising fuel c

CPE Essay on Advertising Sample Correction.

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Submitted by Magda Kowal Essay on Advertising Advertising has become one of the most dynamically developing branches of our economy. Both texts address its evolution and the controversy of whether it is useful or harmful for our society. The first extract endorses the concept of electronically-enhanced vivid imagery to serve the purpose of attracting customers to a business. As well as its potential to  provide information and entertain people.  In addition, the writer states that innovative methods of advertising come with substantial economical advantages, considering their effectiveness to promote products and services. An example of these is the wide range of products being developed by the industry of digital screen media. The second extract, on the contrary, expresses potential dangers connected to the world of digital advertising. According to the author, not only does it intrude upon our lives but also victimises those members of society who find themselves more susceptible to

CPE Exam Preparation. Have your essay corrected for free.

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Submitted by Angelina Busareva Edited by CPESampleWritings. Do you also want to have your writing corrected by us? Send it to gustavo.albarracin.q@gmail.com   Like  also our Page in Facebook. https://www.facebook.com/cpesamplewritings/ Essay on the role of computers As far as I am concerned, Both texts are dealing  deal with the place  role of computers in the life of modern people. However, each of them expresses a different opinion. The first text claims that computers are the most ingenious invention of all times. It says  states that information from all over the world has become widely used and available for any user. From my point of view, it is one of the most valuable advantages for professionals. For example, computers make it possible for businessmen to establish interstate and international relationships. This has a favourable impact on the state of the economy of the country.  Regarding education, it is important to add that computers allow students to access a wide range

CPE 2016 Essay Practice Correction

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Submitted by Cesar Mendez Chavez Edited by CPESampleWritings.  Do you also want to have your writing corrected by us? Send it to gustavo.albarracin.q@gmail.com   Like  also our Page in Facebook. https://www.facebook.com/cpesamplewritings/ Essay on Advertising In the following paragraphs, I will summarise and evaluate two texts related to advertising. While both authors address its evolution in the digital era, one focuses on the excitement of the business while the other criticises it.    On the one hand, outdoor advertising has always been the means to reach potential consumers. With the evolution of technology, digital media has taken over and made advertising an affordable opportunity to call potential customers’ attention, entertain them, and keep them informed. Huge digital plasma screens and billboards are now the key element for advertisers to creatively persuade customers in a lively brightening environment. On the other hand, what was seen as harmless outdoor publicity in the

CPE 2016 Book review correction

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Submitted by Clara Cristalli Edited by CPESampleWritings. Do you also want to have your writing corrected by us? Send it to gustavo.albarracin.q@gmail.com   Like  also our Page in Facebook. https://www.facebook.com/cpesamplewritings/ CPE Writing Exam Part 2 You belong to an English-language reading group which recently read a book in cartoon format. You have agreed to write a review of the book for the group’s website. In your review you should give your opinion of the cartoon format used for the book and say whether you think cartoons are a good way of telling a story, in general. Write your review . Review on the book:The poppies of Iraq The poppies of Iraq  is an autobiographical cartoon by Brigitte Findakly. The author was born in Iraq in the early 1960’s and spent her childhood in Mosul until her family went into exile in France in the 1970’s. Her book is both about her family memories and the political and social situation of her country during those years. Reading this book mad

CPE 2016 Letter to the Editor Correction

Submitted by Maria Labrador Edited by CPESampleWritings. Do you also want to have your writing corrected by us? Send it to gustavo.albarracin.q@gmail.com   Like  also our Page in Facebook. https://www.facebook.com/cpesamplewritings/ Task An English-language magazine is planning a series about  family life in different countries. Readers are invited to send in letters in which they describe a family occasion which was especially memorable and explain its significance in their lives. Dear Sir/Madam,              I am writing in response to the article in which you invite readers to send in their experiences of especial family occasions.  The memory of family occasions is one of our most precious treasures in life due to their unquestionable emotional significance. We are made of memories. Love and family relationships make us as who we are, shaping and modeling us from the inside up to the social responses we provide to others. My most memorable family occasion is formed by the trip tha

CAE Exam 2016 Correction of Essay Sample

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Submitted by Victor  Avramov Edited by CPESampleWritings. Do you also want to have your writing corrected by us? Send it to gustavo.albarracin.q@gmail.com   Like  also our Page in Facebook. https://www.facebook.com/cpesamplewritings/ CAE Essay on Conservation and Biodiversity Authors of two  Both texts evaluate the current challenges in today’s biodiversity  address the topic of conservation of the species and biodiversity. They discuss whether it is a good idea to work so hard on protecting the species when it costs the Governments large sums of money.  The first writer indicates  directs the reader’s attention to tigers and states their protection is of vital importance, as they contribute to the right balance of the ecosystem on a worldwide level.  According to the text, protecting tigers brings advantages to the human population in various forms  such as reducing land waste and erosion.  He also suggests that we need further investment in the protection of other  these species are

CPE Exam Novemver 2016 Essay Sample

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Submitted by Sybille  Edited by CPESampleWritings. Do you also want to have your writing corrected by us? Send it to gustavo.albarracin.q@gmail.com   Like  also our Page in Facebook. https://www.facebook.com/cpesamplewritings/ Essay on ways to relax Nowadays we can turn to natural techniques to help us relieve the stress of our hectic lives without resorting to anti-depressant pills that can do more harm than good. (Suggestion - change the intro ) Both texts address the topic of how to deal with stress and propose healthy alternatives to relax, such as drinking tea or doing gentle exercise. (Suggested intro) The first text boasts the benefits of drinking tea and no wonder this beverage is consumed worldwide.  Be it a cultural tradition or just a pleasure to be enjoyed surrounded by relatives, tea is deemed to be a good beverage to act as a stimulant or to reduce drowsiness.  First and foremost because it is completely devoid of caffeine, and   (careful: this is actually not true. R

CAE Essay Sample. Preparation for the exam on 12.11.2016

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Submitted by Sandra Lopez Essay on new facilities for a seaside town The aim of this essay is to discuss two proposals on new facilities for a seaside town, and to recommend which of them is most likely to bring benefits.  The first proposal is the construction of a family hotel. This appears to be a brilliant idea as the fantastic weather of the town is definitely its main attraction. I personally have no doubt that many tourists would enjoy spending their holidays on the town's sandy beaches. In addition, the hotel will also boost the economy by providing work opportunities for young people. The second proposal is to implement a park and a volleyball court. This also seems a very attractive idea since a survey carried out last month shows that people in the town are interested in getting fit and doing exercise. There is, however, a drawback to this project. The construction of the park would be equally expensive as the hotel, with the difference that it would provide no job oppor

CPE 2017 Letter to the editor Sample ( Formal Writing )

Dear CPESamplewritings, could you please correct my "Letter to the Editor" sample for the CPE exam?  I unfortunately do not have the task in hand. Best Regards Maria L Letter to the Editor Sample  Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in response to the article in last Sunday's edition of your magazine regarding readers' recent experiences of making an important decision. Thus, I would like to comment on this subject by talking about a significant decision I had to make not long ago when I had to decide about between staying in my hometown or moving to a different place to start a new life altogether. First of all I believe that it is worth noting that, sometimes in life, we are confronted with difficult decisions. Whether these involve love, work, personal relationships or relocation, a tough call is implied. I recently found myself in one of this unconfortable   uncomfortable positions when I had to choose between continuing with my life as it had been for a long time (wor

CPE 2017 Article on your favourite building Sample

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Submitted by Andrea Zubia Palazuelos   A travel magazine has asked readers to send in articles on their favourite public building, a town hall or a museum, for example. You decide to write an article in which you describe your favourite public building, explain why it is your favourite building and assess its significance for the wider community. Write your article. Use 240-280 words. The Festivals Palace Are you a person who when hearing “public building” imagines a place dominated by routinary and boring tasks? If the answer is yes, you certainly have not had the pleasure of visiting the Festivals Palace. Even though time has affected its white and green structure, the Festivals Palace still keeps its majesty, dominating the view of the bay of Santander.  Controversy has surrounded its external form. The general opinion has baptized it as “the puppy”, due to its position resembling a dog lying on its back. But as much as this label might diminish the importance of this building to th
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Submitted by Antonio Gómez Flores Essay on food When talking about food almost everybody has in mind the fact of “eating” as a necessity for all human beings. Nevertheless, food has other benefits that we cannot ignore, such as providing a time and space for people to interact with each other. The extracts above revolve around the importance of food not only as something vital for life, but as an incomparable pleasure which we sometimes neglect in our hectic society. It has been shown scientifically that food is synonym with happiness . What really differentiate us from animals is not simply eating, but the way we do it. Who has not had great family moments during a dinner conversation? Or who has not enjoyed watching football with friends while having a delicious pizza? It is surely beyond all dispute that food is a unique pleasure that triggers positive emotions within us: love, excitement, security, and last but not least, happiness. What is more, in many cultures food is a symbol

CPE exam 2017 Essay on Traffic Sample

Submitted by  Luísa Matta Machado Fernandes Souza Task Type: Essay Question Read the two texts below. Write an essay summarising and evaluating the key points from both texts. Use your own words throughout as far as possible and include your own ideas in your answers. Tackling Traffic Congestion Policy-makers employ a wide range of measures to tackle the problem of traffic congestion. Enforcement schemes such as setting strict speed limits on major roads and the use of congestion charges in city centres are two such examples as are vehicle exclusion zones or parking restrictions in busy pedestrian areas. However, it also makes sense to encourage motorists to become less reliant on their car. This can be achieved by making public transport more efficient and promoting the benefits of car-sharing with work colleagues, thus reducing weekly fuel bills. And the increasing number of cycle lanes on many roads is further evidence of how to win the hearts and minds of m