CPE June 2017 Writing and feedback
Hello Gustavo, My name is Maria M. and I am taking the CPE exam this June. I am having some problems with my writings and I spend a lot of time trying to find the correct ideas, so I hope you can help me improve my skills. I suppose it is a matter of practice. Thank you so much in advance. I send you attached the task and my writing. This is the task: An English language magazine is running a series on the topic of happiness. You decide to send in an article. You should briefly describe one or two situations in which you have experienced a sense of happiness. You should also analyse what contributes to feelings of happiness for many people and suggest whether the pursuit is a worthwhile aim. Writings + Feedback Happiness: The eternal search. ( Feedback:Why did you choose this title? Why is it an eternal search? Do you mean it is impossible to find happiness? ) Why is happiness so vital for the humankind?. What makes people feel happy?. The answers to these questions can be so dive